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Coma White
by
Ryanne

Chapter 1: Daniel

 

 

"I'll miss the winter
a world of fragile things
look for me in the white forest
hiding in a hollow tree (come find me)
I know you hear me
I can taste it in your tears..."

 

  "Daniel go home! Do I have to make that an order?" Colonel Jack O' Neill nearly shouted at Daniel Jackson....excuuuuse me, DOCTOR Daniel Jackson. Had been for the past fifteen minutes without any sign that the younger man had any intention of following that suggestion. 'If ONLY he was military' Jack thought, I could MAKE him go.

 

  "You can't order me Jack remember....although I think you MAY be going a little senile because we've been over this for years now." Daniel shot back.

 

  "I could always have one of the other SG teams "accidentally" forget to report artifacts to you......for a month or two."

 

  "You WOULDN'T!" Daniel narrowed his eyes behind his glasses. Then again, he knew Jack would. He HAD spent the last six years learning lessons like that the hard way. Even less than six months back from the dead Jack was still being a bit of a mother hen about Daniels not falling into bad habits like not getting enough sleep.

 

  Jack gave him a look with that face turning challenging and smug.

 

  "Wanna test your theory Doc?"

 

  Deciding to think up a proper method of revenge that didn't threaten his job.....or his freedom, Daniel narrowed his eyes at Jack but started gathering up things anyway. Papers, books, and files shoved with more force than necessary into a black bag, and while Jack watched him carefully, he defiantly snapped closed his laptop and shoved that into the same bag.

 

   "Don't even Jack...." Daniels patience was running thin. Taking away his ability to work from home was one straw too many, and Jack silently agreed to the compromise. But he DID escort the slightly seething archeologist all the way to his car.

 

   "Satisfied mother?" Daniel groused. He had a ton of work to do, and didn't appreciate the interruption.

 

   "Look Daniel, I know you'd rather work yourself into a coma on your desk, but it’s been less than a week since you came down with a bad case of the schizoids on that stupid stranded ship. Hell it’s been only six months since your glowy ass got back here...." Jack stopped, turning to look at the skyline behind them over the huge mouth of the Cheyenne Mountain entrance.

 

   "I....I mean....WE can't take the chances we used to....." Jack sighed, and Daniel forgot any irritation and anger he was feeling. He forgot sometimes what he'd put his friends through, and it was easy to fall into his old routines without realizing that while they may be old to him, while he was gone, pain and loss had gripped his friends, and made up some new ones for them. Including watching him like a hawk.

 

    "I'm...sorry...."Although what Daniel was apologizing for he wasn't sure. He just looked into the warm brown eyes of his best friend, and saw the ghost of the grief that was still there reflected back at him. Daniels eyes stung. Although being forced from his obsessive work was annoying, facing the agony his friends still dealt with on a regular basis was infinitely worse. He didn't remember a thing, but they did, so a decrease in his stubbornness was a small sacrifice.

 

  Jack just gave him one of his patent sideways smiles and opened Daniels car door for him. Swallowing any sort of pride, Daniel just got in and started the car.

 

  "Jack...." He started.

 

  "Just get some sleep will ya? Briefing at 0730 on Wednesday." Daniel nodded and drove away.

 

  To his credit, Daniel HAD tried to sleep. He'd gotten into his jammies and tucked himself in like a good little boy, but he couldn't sleep. He'd worked until 1 AM, and then biting his lip as he thought he was making a breakthrough on some translations SG-6 had brought back, but then, he thought to himself, he'd been saying that very same thing for two days.

 

  Getting up, he grabbed for his glasses on the nightstand, and looked at the time. 3:30. Great, juuuuuuust great. Jack was going to love this. A walk. Maybe a walk. Daniel went to his closet and replaced his sweats with jeans. It was warm out, not exactly California warm. He missed the West Coast warmth. He pulled on a long sleeved t-shirt, and then headed out into the night.

 

   On nights like this, you could see every star, every tiny little star, and it made him smile. He was thinking about every star in the sky he couldn't see, but that he HAD experienced. Not that it hadn't cost him. His wife, home, his happiness, his LIFE....that one he was getting tired of really.

 

   He seriously hoped he hadn't gotten that jaded, but it seemed inevitable. He missed his innocence. He could barely remember a time when his eyes didn't walk into something with a sense of stiffness and wariness. If he wasn't careful, he was running the risk of ending up a lot like Jack. And even Jack would say that wasn't something he would want for Daniel.

 

   So lost in thought, he didn't realize when he'd walked out of his own neighborhood. In fact, he'd wandered past his block considerably and now was in another world. Run down buildings, broken neon signs, people that were walking around him as if he didn't even exist to them.

 

  That’s when he heard it. In his life, he'd heard women talk with less than ladylike words. Sam on occasion got quite vocal when she was working on something and it wasn’t going according to plan. But the yelling voice that came out into the night right across the alley from him was unlike anything he'd ever seen out of a female mouth.

End of Chapter One of Coma White
By Ryanne
Continue to Chapter Two

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