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Coma White
by
Ryanne

Chapter 7: Lateralus

 

"I've watched you change

Into a fly

I looked away
You were on fire

I watched a change

In you
It's like you never
Had wings
Now you feel
So Alive..."

 

  The house that Daniel returned to wasn't a house he felt the same in. There was life in it, blazing life. As soon as they walked into the house, Daniel noticed the change in Annie. The way she dropped her coat casually on the floor. She went into her bedroom, and brought out her CD player. He seemed frozen to the spot as he saw light come from the door. Candlelight.

 

  "Daniel....oh paging Dr. Jackson..." Annie purred.

 

 He walked into his room. The bedcovers were turned down. There were dozens of candles blazing in the room. The song coming from the player was darkly seductive. But the sight that made him pay attention the most was Annie herself. Divested of her jewelry, her raven hair fell to her waist. She had taken off her boots, skirt, and now stood on his bed in nothing but fishnet thigh highs, a tight corset, and a thong.

 

    "Annie.....my god." Daniel breathed. No woman had ever SEDUCED him before. Sarah had always been clinical, Sha're had happily done her marital duties, not to mention the fumbling he'd done in college. He'd never seen THIS before. And it had been SO long. She crooked her finger at him.

 

 

“I’ve watched you change

I took you home

Set you on the glass

I pulled off your wings

Then I laughed
   I watched a change

In you

It's like you never

Had wings

Now you feel

So alive..."

 

  Annie dropped to all fours, and grabbed the hem of his t-shirt, pulling him closer. She helped him pull it off, tossing it on the floor along with all the other clothes still there. Daniel watched as she dipped low, allowing him to look down and see the breasts rising up and down inside the corset. She noticed the huge scar from his appendix three years ago.

 

  "Nice scar...." She ran her fingers over it, and for some reason, that deviantly sexual caress made Daniel’s eyes roll back in his head.

 

  When he looked down again, her breasts were practically falling out of the tight containing lace. He flushed and tried to look away. She ran her nails lightly up his chest slowly. When she got to his face, she tipped it up.

 

  "You wanna look at my tits Daniel....look. I'll even make it easy for you." Annie sat up, and Daniel watched mesmerized as she unhooked the tight corset, opening it up. The cleavage spilled out and he caught an eyeful of her breasts. Made of the same white skin and topped with red nipples, she ran her hands over them herself, down her stomach, where she fiddled with her belly ring. The pentagram that hung off the curved bar twinkled in the light. There was a winding thorn tattooed there. Along the Chinese symbol for "Strange".

 

  "Like the view. Artistic huh?" Annie asked, suggestively flicking the ring down there, so close to the top of her thong. She dipped her fingers inside and moaned.  Something inside Daniel snapped. He crawled forward, knocking her down and settling between her thighs. Her black hair fanned out all over his white sheets that had never known a woman’s touch before.

 

  "My turn..." Daniel growled. Annie laughed.

 

  Daniel kissed her. Hard, letting the pain from her lip ring tune him up, letting it take away his usual restraint. The "Golden Boy" of the SGC. The diplomat, the scholar, and the thinker. God, he was tired of it all. The spiritual enlightenment that had been packed with lies and the return that had been filled with an empty memory. The grey walls, the briefings and heavy packs. That weary feeling had started to return. Cold. He reared up and licked his lips, tasting lipstick. He buried his face in her neck, licking and biting there. Hot. Heat. He almost wanted to cry. It had been so goddamn long.

 

  "Oh yes Daniel...let go...." Annie implored from her place underneath him. She ran her fingers down the arm that brought her middle to his, thick, tan flesh mixed with glowing pale. She undulated against him. Long fingers, well used, calloused slipped between them to steal under the top of her barely there thong, and finding her shaved, he looked at her incredulously.

 

  "You're...."

 

  "Nice and smooth isn't it. Feels good. Doesn't it?" Annie purred.

 

 She was right. It DID feel good. She was hot. Hot enough to light a fire. And wet. Ready. So ready. He let his fingers trail downwards until they found her throbbing clit, and he looked at her while he rubbed it. He watched her face as she jerked like being electrified, and moaned. Daniel smirked. He worked his way down, sucking on her nipple. He looked up, blue meeting green in a battle of who was more turned on.

                                   

" I've watched you change

I took you home

Set you on the glass

I pulled off your wings

Then I laughed
                       I watched a change

In you

It's like you never

Had wings

Now you feel

So alive..."

 

   Licking across her chest and stomach, Daniel began to feel something else. Like he'd felt that terrible day with Hathor, but it was more his own. As if this tendril of an unknown well was sneaking up on him. Because the next thing he knew, he was looking into those eyes. Annie’s light green eyes, so wild. She dared him, pulled on the tendril until he was consumed by his own need. He licked his lips, and using strong hands, built by many a mission, tore her thong off. Annie gasped and laughed, writhing somewhat.

 

  "Dr. Jackson!" Annie teased. But she was scratching down up his back and licking her own lips.

 

 Daniel smirked. Dr. Jackson wasn't available. He fell between her legs. Annie jerked as he was all of a sudden eating her out. It happened faster than she expected it to, and was shocked as she felt a soft, wet presence stimulating her labia and clit. She pulled on silky brown hair. Panted.

 

  "Daniel!" He looked up, blue eyes dilated.

 

  "Yes dear?" He almost teased. She opened her legs wider. He knew what she wanted. More pleasure. So he gave it to her.  He ran one hand up to capture her throat, before returning to licking her. He'd only done this a dozen times in his life. Sha're hadn't liked it, thought it was some kind of sin. But Annie didn't share in that obviously, because she was wiggling and moaning. He licked faster, waiting, waiting for just that moment, when she was out of control, and then he would let her go.

 

  "OH DANIEL!!!" Annie exclaimed.

 

  Perfect. The sound echoed in his heart, and he licked her just hard enough, sliding two long fingers inside her. Tight. He felt her walls contract. She screamed out. Annie lost control. And with it, so did her power. Her orgasm shivered through Daniel, and they were connecting. Annie was already seeing and feeling part of his mind. Oh god, he was so cold. Inhaling deeply of his scent and his arousal, she knew what had to be done. And she was ALL too willing to do it. She smirked, and kept up appearances though. Running her hands over her own throbbing body, she said two words Daniel thought he'd never forget.

 

  "Fuck me."

 

 Blue eyes went wide.

 

Annie smirked. "You've never heard those words before baby?" Daniel shook his head. "Too bad. C'mere."

 

  He sat up, and Annie crawled to him, unbuttoning his jeans and pulling them down. She then licked his neck and started to suck on one area near the pulse. The nerves there became inflamed by her mouth and sweeping tongue ring. Realizing his cock was throbbing against her belly; Daniel pulled her away, and kissed her. He ran his hands down her legs, the texture of her hose exciting him.

 

              "I've watched you change

I took you home

Set you on the glass

I pulled off your wings

Then I laughed
   I watched a change

In you

It's like you never

Had wings

Now you feel

So alive..."

                                      

 

  Daniel slid up Annie’s body, blinking as he felt the pull. Her eyes feeling like a drug as it enveloped him. He felt explosions in his mind. He pulled back for just a moment. Annie smirked. She had already heard the silent last ditch effort to think clearly on his part.

 

  "I'm on the pill and clean Daniel." She assured him.

 

  It was the breaking point. He began to pant as he finally pushed his hips forward, and slid inside her. She was wet and hot and tight and.....

 

  "God! Annie!" Daniel called out. She noticed his eyes were almost completely black, the ring of blue a tiny one. She ran her hands along his until they were joined at the place where he was holding himself up. He held on for dear life as he made love to her. Slowly, then faster, and then something happened. A dam broke. He FELT her. Not only her body wrapped around his, but how he felt inside her. The pleasure was astounding as he worked her. Higher and higher.

 

  Annie was in full out bliss. She could feel everything he was. Her body and mind were throbbing. Fission. The connection complete. She took them up; literally feeling like the wind was rushing over them, the oceans bursting. Fire blazing. Memories. Feelings. She was feeling him from the inside. She screamed. Oh god, it was coming.

 

  "Daniel......oh god…fuck me...don't stop.....it's....it's...."

 

  "Yes....its....it’s....." Daniel agreed. He was also seeing flashes of feelings, the feeling of melting, fission.

 

  "DANIELANNIE!" The names rang out as one as they exploded together. Daniel shook as he lost control of himself and thrust one last time, feeling the shudder and the burn everywhere. He couldn't tell who was screaming, but it was one of them, because he could feel HER come too.

 

  Annie was convulsing and screaming. Her insides clenching. She could feel him shudder and spill. She held on until the last tide hit the sand, then accepted Daniels body as he collapsed on her. They were both panting and jumping with aftershocks. He pulled from her and rolled over, pulling her onto his chest. She pulled her hair out of the way and felt the receding of their minds.

 

  "What was that?" Daniel asked. His voice wasn't accusing, but she knew she needed to be honest. 'I'll just leave' she thought. She tried to get up, only to be held there by an arm around her waist.

 

  "I.....I think I better go...." Annie said softly, and tried to get up again.

 

  "Something just happened Annie, and you'll have to explain it soon....but I don't really care right now. I don't. The whole world could be exploding right now, and I wouldn't care. I have never in my life made love like that. I feel ALIVE right now, and I haven't felt truly alive in a very long time." Daniel meant every word. He DID feel alive. Vibrating with Annie’s exploding world and her staggering sex, he felt better than he'd felt......since Sha're was taken from him. Its ironic how a woman who couldn't be further from Sha're would be the one to make his heart beat again. He yawned.

 

  "Sleep baby.  You're tired and you've had a really long night." Daniels blue eyes slid shut, and his breathing evened out. Annie thought he looked like a little boy when he slept. She silently wondered if he ever really WAS one.

 

"Now you feel Alive

You Feel Alive

I've watched you change

It's like you never

Had wings..."

End of Chapter Seven of Coma White
By Ryanne
Continue to Chapter Eight

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